TSIS p132 #2

After looking at the essay, I have indeed used some of the generic or specific moves, it allows for the writer to become more comfortable and commentate throughout the paper. The title of the paper was Beauty In Society; it is short, sweet and to the point and tells the reader what it is about. By using the introduction as a road map or outline, it orchestrates where the text will go by only providing introductory information, then explaining in detail later on in the paper. I basically use metacommentary to help me get my ideas across and elaborate on previous sub-points or viewpoints to connect all of the ideas together and conclude all thoughts. My text is satisfactory in length and I already used some of the metacommentary moves to fill in some blank or lean areas.